One day ago there was a girl who was going down the escalator and went to do some shopping. She bought expensive clothing because she was rich. She felt scared when she was alone but that was years ago. She is now an adult.
When she went up the escalator, she found herself in a foggy forest and she was nervous. She remembered that her mum told her to be brave. So she walked to find her way home. When she got home, she tried her fancy clothing and she was really happy.
Ka pai Norman. I like how you have a mixture of simple, compound and complex sentences. Is that what you were learning? Maybe you could tell us more about the task you were completing.
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