Hi Norman. Thank you for sharing your work with us. I like the way your described Jack and his journey. Did Jack find out why the engine stopped? Next step: Check your punctuation to make sure that it is placed in the right place. I can see that you have used full stops in some parts of your story that needs a comma. Keep up the good work.
Hi Norman. Thank you for sharing your work with us. I like the way your described Jack and his journey. Did Jack find out why the engine stopped? Next step: Check your punctuation to make sure that it is placed in the right place. I can see that you have used full stops in some parts of your story that needs a comma. Keep up the good work.
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